Year Zero Jeff Long

The Only 5 Ingredients You Need for Story Subtext

If there’s a magic ingredient in writing, it’s story subtext. It’s actually not magic, of course, any more than any of the other demystified techniques of structure, theme, or character arc. But story subtext often seems like magic simply because, by its very nature, it is the execution of the unexplained. Subtext is supposed to be invisible. It lives […]

A Simple Trick to Create Three-Dimensional Characters

As much as you may love your characters, there’s never any guarantee readers will love them just as much. Think about it. There are so many awesome three-dimensional characters, in both film and literature, clamoring for people’s attention and affection. How do you make yours rise above the pack into memorability? This, of course, is […]

Use This Subplot to Bring Depth to Plot-Driven Stories

Subplots are surprisingly misunderstood. Primarily, this is because the best subplots are always natural offshoots of the plot itself. They’re so integral to the plot that they’re basically inextricable from it. Let me start with a basic definition of the subplot: The subplot is a thematically related exploration of a minor part of the protagonist’s […]

Add Muscle to Your Fiction With Unity and Contrast

Our eyes see the world in shades of light and dark. Without one or the other, details fade into invisibility. The painting technique known as chiaroscuro (which as Lemony Snicket would say, is a big, big word meaning, quite literally, “light-dark”) makes full use of the contrast between light and dark to pull details into […]

How to Use Comedy and Tragedy for a One-Two Punch

In his “Letter to a Young, Talented Author,” dramatist William Saroyan offers this advice: Remember to be good-humored. Remember to be generous. And remember that in the midst of that which is most tragic, there is always the comic, and in the midst of that which is most evil, there is always much good. Nothing […]

5 Ways to Capture Brilliant Ideas for Your Novel

Are You Utilizing Ugly Settings?

In lieu of the usual video post (as I continue my week off), I thought I’d share a reader’s response to the post “The Importance of a Fabulous Setting” from a couple weeks ago. David Taylor emailed me the following, and his thoughts were too good not to pass along: I watched your video and […]

4 Ways to Improve Your Story With Juxtaposition

4 Questions to Improve Your Stories With Powerful Juxtaposition

An easy way to add depth to a story is to introduce one of the most marvelous techniques known to writers: juxtaposition. Juxtaposition is the art of contrast, the foundation of dichotomy, and the tool of both subtlety and boldness. In using juxtaposition, you are able to take two seemingly incompatible things and combine them […]