How to Illustrate Characters Through Their Surroundings

One of my favorite parts of watching a movie is the opportunity to spy on the characters’ familiar surroundings. Their homes, their bedrooms, and their offices all present wonderful insights into personality. The visual medium of film allows for all kinds of details to be included, some so minuscule or subtle most viewers probably won’t even notice them. Of course, authors can’t go to quite that same extreme without boring readers with a grocery list of description. But you can still use your characters’ surroundings to help readers understand them in a more intimate way.

In her debut novel Adam Bede, George Eliot introduced readers to a farming family by first introducing their home. She gives the broad overview of the house, then zooms in on details such as fleeces and empty corn bags stacked in the corners and a child’s doll lying on the floor.

Before we meet even one member of the family, Eliot already allows us to form an accurate opinion about them simply by showing us where they live, how they care for their possessions, and which items they treasure.

Although you should be careful not to overdo descriptions, be aware of this technique and be willing to put it into practice. If your story allows, stage at least one scene in your character’s personal surroundings. Sketch the setting briefly when the characters first enter it, then scatter important details throughout the scene.

Ask yourself:

• Is your character sloppy or neat?
• Rich or poor?
• Can readers tell interests or hobbies from the items on display?
• Are there any clues to backstory or dreams for the future?

The possibilities are endless and easily unleashed.

Wordplayers, tell me your opinions! How do you show the details of your character’s personal surroundings? Tell me in the comments!