What separates a good story from a great one? We might throw out a lot of opinions, but mine is this: Your story’s theme is what will raise it above the pack, out of mere entertainment into something that sticks with readers, impacts their lives, and maybe even challenges them to grow. Awesomesauce!, you say. Great theme, here I come!, you say. But how do you find your story’s theme?
Half the problem with theme is that authors tend to look at it as if it exists in a vacuum. You’ve got a great story, so now you have to come up with an equally great theme to go along with it. But that doesn’t work any better than making a fab PB&J sandwich and then realizing you left out the veggies: better stick some spinach in there, right?
Theme isn’t an add-on. It isn’t a bonus feature. Your story’s theme is its heart, and, as such, it must be all of a piece with your plot and your characters’ arcs. So how do you find your story’s theme? Easy-peasy! Look no farther than your character’s arc.
Theme Is The Foundation of Your Story
In the October 2004 issue of Writer’s Digest, Martha Alderson explained:
The theme is the “why”—your reason for writing the story….
Writing Your Story’s Theme (affiliate link)
Why are you writing this story? Why are you writing about these characters? What is it about their journey that has drawn your heart? What is the core of the tale? Justice, mercy, love, revenge, self-discovery? Whatever it is that’s moving the characters is what’s also moving your story. That’s your theme.
Story by Robert McKee (affiliate link)
In his bravura book Story, Robert McKee writes that instead of the term “theme”:
I prefer the phrase Controlling Idea, for like theme, it names a story’s root or central idea, but it also implies function: The Controlling Idea shapes the writer’s strategic choices. It’s yet another Creative Discipline to guide your aesthetic choices toward what is appropriate or inappropriate in your story, toward what is expressive of your Controlling Idea and may be kept versus what is irrelevant to it and must be cut.
In other words, your theme is the lighthouse in your story’s sea. If you can identify your theme upfront, you’ll be able to keep your entire story on track. If any aspect of character or plot fails to contribute to this controlling idea of theme, then you know it’s probably extraneous.
So far, so good. But maybe you’ve already got a story in mind. Your characters are already involved in their journey. Their story has already started. It’s not like you can just pick any random theme and shoehorn it in–like that spinach in our no-longer-so-perfect PB&J.
How can you identify the right theme when all the other story elements arrive first?
Plot, Character Arc, and Theme: How They’re Connected and How They’re Different
Remember way back when we talked about how character arcs are powered by the conflicting Thing Your Character Wants and the Thing Your Character Needs? Nestled right between the two is where you’ll find your theme. Here’s a quick refresher of what these two Things are and how they work in a story.
The Thing Your Character Wants = Plot
The Thing Your Character Wants is the main story goal. For whatever reason, your character believes he needs this thing. Maybe he does, maybe he doesn’t. But whatever it is, it drives his every action in the story. What he doesn’t realize, however, is that this Want isn’t what he Needs.
The Thing Your Character Wants–the main story goal–is your story’s plot.
The Thing Your Character Needs = Theme
This is the fundamental need at the core of your character. It’s something he’s almost certainly unconscious of to some extent. He might even be in denial about it. But he will never be complete until he recognizes and fulfills this need. Thanks to a fundamental Lie He Believes–about either himself or the world–he either believes he doesn’t want the Need or doesn’t deserve the Need. This is the true goal of your story, but it’s a goal that’s going to be working largely under the surface.
The Thing Your Character Needs is your story’s theme.
The Thing Your Character Wants vs. the Thing Your Character Needs = Character Arc
Put these two Things together by forcing your character to grow to the point of being willing to sacrifice his Want in order to gain his Need–and suddenly you’ve got a character arc. All three–plot, theme, and character arc–are integral to one another. Your character arc will always drive your plot, and your theme will always be found at the heart of the arc. Figure out the fundamental questions your character will be asking in his journey through the plot–figure out the crux of his change or lack thereof–and you will have found the theme your story must tell.
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The Best Way to Double-Check Your Story’s Theme
Once you’ve figured out the theme that is inherent to the heart of your story, take a moment to analyze whether this is really the best theme for this story. Might you get a better, more impactful theme if you were able to tweak your plot and character arc?
Double-check your story’s theme by summarizing it as briefly as possible. Is it something general like justice vs. mercy? Or is it something super-specific like A Christmas Carol‘s better to die a pauper than unloved?
The value of summing up your story’s theme like this is that it gives you a better sense of its relative originality and risk. Don’t settle for safe themes. Look for dangerous, controversial ones. You want to make readers think. You want to ask hard questions–not the same old questions that are asked over and over again. True originality is always found in theme. The braver and more honest your theme, the more original and true your story will be.
Take a moment to consider your story’s theme. Does it leap right out at you? Or do you have to do a little digging? And when you do find it, does it work in harmony with your plot and character arcs? Now think about how you can strengthen and refine it to create something truly special.
Tell me your opinion: What is your story’s theme? How is it reflected in your character’s arc?
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You are one big life saver. Thanks… Maybe I have mentioned it to you that I am participating this NaNo’s. So I was superly into my story when everything suddenly started to fall apart. The spark gone and my progress non-existent. Maybe, this is where the actual problem was. I will get to a brainstorming session right away 😀
Thanks again!
Theme is the life force of any story. Developing it can only strengthen every other aspect.
Yeah! Can’t even begin to describe how many new ideas have came to my mind through this post. My mini block is over and now I am easily producing words. Thanks
That’s awesome! Keep writing!
I just discovered that my main character arc’s theme is completely different from the story theme.
His theme is: it’s better to not let others determine our happiness
But the story is a romance with a theme of it’s better to have love than chase a legacy.
How do I reconcile this? My main character is facing challenges that have nothing to do with the Lie the character believes
I keep restarting my outline over and over again
Could it be that choosing love over legacy is equivalent to rejecting another’s control over our happiness?
I totally agree. Theme is so essential to great writing. I love to write, but sometimes I ask myself why I’m writing THIS story, and then I realize my theme is either a slap-on or it doesn’t exist at all.
I discovered some writing tips from one of Pixar’s writers. He mentioned that theme is something you discover in your story as you write it; it’s not something you decide upon and outline into your story. Otherwise it’s not authentic.
I think I agree with that . . . but what’s your opinion on that idea?
I both agree – and disagree. Theme has to start as an inherent ingredient of the story: a nugget that’s already buried within the premise and the characters. Like I said in the post, it can’t be shoehorned in. But by the time outlining/writing phase rolls around, that’s when we need to start consciously thinking about theme and figuring out the best way to expand, deepen, and implement it.
Very true. Thanks for answering my question!
Bang on! Theme is story – you don’t have to be conscious of it, however what the story is and how you write it ought to subconsciously be informed by your theme:
As an model example, take ‘The Representative’. Part of its core theme is purity of purpose, and of life, hence its tight written mode of condensed expression, and of minimalism.
Theme almost always starts in the subconscious, but it’s always valuable to claim it consciously so that we can better implement it.
I use the same theme in every story: grace. It’s an easy one for me, because it’s also the theme of my life story. 🙂
Guilt and redemption are ones I keep coming back to. I think many authors tend to explore and re-explore different facets of the same themes in all their works.
I literally just wrote down a page-long note about the arc of one of my characters, and it absolutely encompasses the entire story’s theme. In fact, looking at the arcs of each character who has one – they all do. Every character arc in my WIP is related to this theme, which also directly drives the plot as well.
And then I read this no more than one hour later, and it’s like you’ve read my mind. Craziest of all is how often this happens. I’m very happy that you and I think on a very similar wavelength, because it means I’m headed in the right direction. How refreshing it is to interact with somebody who thinks so similarly to myself – no matter the means nor the distance.
Once again, I extend to you my gratitude for helping me decipher the brambles in my brain.
Spot on! When all the character arcs reflect that one main theme, you know you’ve got a tight, cohesive story on your hands.
I’ve noticed over the years that I only finish writing stories that have a compelling theme. If the story doesn’t feel like it has to be told, I stop writing it. The theme for my YA Contemporary is that hatred always leads to violence. Neither sides wins. The theme for my MG mystery is that science is cool and learning can be fun and educational.
It’s true. No theme, no story is just as true as no conflict, no story. Truer.
Wait, learning can be educational?
Maybe better refine that
Very interesting read! Just like all of your articles. Really helps me think about my stories in a new way.
Glad you found the post useful!
What you called “theme” here is also known as “moral premise”, isn’t it?
Is essence, yes. “Theme” is a little more all encompassing than the moral premise, but the moral premise is definitely at its heart. I’ll actually be touching on this a bit in next Sunday’s post.
I just came back to this post through your latest email, and it couldn’t have arrived at a better time! Really just struggling with characters within my theme and plot right now. This helped me clear up what my character should be doing and how to give the plot a satisfying track. Just wanted to say thanks for your posts!
I’m learning so much from your posts and podcast. They came as a Good Samaritan to the one lost in deep wood. Thank you!
I was mulling over the possible themes for my story in-progress. Eventually it occurred to me that it’s nothing more or less then the story of “death and resurrection”. It came as a surprise, ranging from – No, are you crazy? – to – Of course, how could I not see it before.
This is scary theme, because first story with similar theme that comes to mind is New Testament, the story of Jesus. I am totally and decidedly dissociated with anything that has to do with organized religion. But I wonder if you would be willing to take on a challenge of analyzing the story of Jesus from the writer’s perspective – the theme, the plot, the structure, protagonist, antagonist, climax, all the good staff you’ve been talking about. After all, this is one of The Stories, that kept humanity’s imagination captivated for 2,000 years… Thanks 🙂
That’d be a challenge! I’ll see what I can do.
Thanks for this article! It made me think of the “premise” in an old craft book (originally for playwrights) called “The Art of Dramatic Writing,” by Lajos Egri. His definition of dramatic premise implies characters and conclusion, so once you figure out your premise (whether you start there or figure out as you write), you then have to make sure that you’ve chosen the best characters and situation to prove the dramatic premise. He gives the example of “True love defies even death,” which implies lovers as characters, that there is a conflict that would separate them, and that they would choose death over separation (spoiler alert: it’s the premise of “Romeo and Juliet”).
I love it when two ways of talking about writing harmonize so nicely! It makes sense, because good stories have the same underlying principles. 🙂
I think my theme is the possibility of accepting difficult and changing circumstances as long as you choose love and support over superficial security. The two supporting characters to the protagonist have already had this realization/decision. The protagonist is struggling with it, because he has been given and taught the opposite by the antagonist.
Awesome post! Digging into my own themes now and kept running into walls. Mostly because I have 3 main characters. Two are main heroes (one with a stronger overall story, both with positive change arcs) and the other a villain (in a fall character arc).
The theme for MC 1 is that she Wants revenge for her family’s death and, as a result, has almost ended up with tunnel vision. “If I get revenge for my family, I will be satisfied.” But what she needs is to be open to community. To not be such a cold, lone wolf and open up again.
The theme for my second MC is that he Wants to remain in his safe, relatively risk-free life. But he needs to come out of his shell and embrace at least some risk. Live his life again.
My antagonist Wants to cling to the idea that he and his kind cannot die. That they are all powerful. But what he needs to learn is that that sort of thinking is foolish–he can be destroyed.
So…hm. The theme for the novel sounds like ‘The refusal to take risks and sacrifice for others–to change–only leads to more dissatisfaction?’
I’m a bit lost. Feels like a ‘one of these is not like the others’ situation.
At a glance, community seems to be a common theme. Try turning your thematic premise around so it’s a positive statement rather than a negative statement.
Theme: Love can see your battle scars and still see your beauty. MC was raped and physcially abused in two previous relationships and is trying to embrace that her happiness does not include a significant other because no one would want to be with her after they learn what she’s been through. Her love interest is attracted to her despite learning about the abuse, her struggle with anxiety and how his dreams will change because of what happened to her. (The whole thing is written and now, I’m learning about theme. Yes, I may have to revise.) Does that sound like a theme? Does the brief synopsis mesh?
Sounds good to me!
In the past week, I’ve come across a blog entry that strengthened my story AND helped me finally tie up loose ends. This entry helped uncover my theme: love. I hadn’t noticed before, but every character is doing what they’re doing, ultimately, good or bad, right or wrong, for love, or what they believe is love. Is that too broad? Does it need to be narrowed down?
“Love” is a perfectly acceptable theme within the big picture of the story. Your actual thematic premise will probably be more specific, based on the individual Lies/Truths your characters are dealing with.
You are an absolute ANGEL. I’ve been struggling with my story’s theme for SO LONG and this helped me find it in a few hours! The part I like most about my theme is that is relevant to the world and speaks my truth. Thank you so much! Love your blog!
I’m having trouble with my theme and a choice my main character makes.
My main character’s arc involves him realizing that he should focus on helping keeping people safe as a knight rather than only want the job for the pay and to impress people.
Eventually, after my main character’s change, I wanted to have him choose to sacrifice his life to exploit a weakness in the seemingly invincible main antagonist that his allies can use to stop the main antagonist.
However, my theme is “One should take care of their well being.” and I don’t see how my main character is prioritizing his well being by sacrificing himself nor do I see how his arc relates to the theme I want. I was also considering my themes to be “Sometimes it can be okay to give up” or “There needs to be a balance between doing things for yourself and doing things for others.”. However, I don’t see how I can relate these to my main character’s choice to sacrifice himself or his arc. Would you happen to have any suggestions?
Thank you for your time!
If you’re having trouble fitting the theme to the plot, you might consider scrapping the intending theme and examining what themes are inherent with the plot’s actions.
Hmm but would those themes feel shoehorned in as I would be coming up with the actions and then themes that relate to those actions after?
And would I be able to salvage the themes instead of scrapping them if I show them through other characters besides the main character? Or is it best to limit my story to one theme?
Theme is always found within the actions of the plot. If the plot isn’t proving your intended theme, then trying to include it anyway *will* create a shoehorned feeling. But if you examine what the events of your plot really are saying, you can strengthen the theme that’s already there.
Okay, I think I understand what you mean by shoehorning the theme by forcing a theme to fit the actions of the story
I now seem to be having trouble with my main character (the knight that I mentioned on July 1, 2020) and his need. At the beginning of the story, he fails several times in combat related duties. However, instead of learning from his mistakes and taking steps to improve, he avoids facing them by distracting himself with material things. It’s only when he realizes that he should focus on protecting people that leads him to actually start taking steps to get better.
The thing is my main character is fully aware that he’s a poor fighter in the beginning of the story based on critiques he gets from others and just witnessing the consequences of his mistakes. Thus, I think this would mean he knows he has to improve and take steps to do so from the start. It’s just that he’s not actually taking those steps.
I remember reading in John Truby’s “The Anatomy of Story” that a character should not be aware of their need from the start because that would mean the story is over. However, I don’t see how it’s possible for my main character to not be aware of the need to improve based on external things. So even if my main character is aware he needs to improve from the start, If he still has to discover the need to follow through with steps to improve, is my story idea still considered over from the start?
Thank you for your time.
Nope, sounds like you’re on the right track to me.
Katie, thank you. I believe that “to thine own self be true” is the theme of most of my stories and of my own life. Is it useful to break that down into a smaller chunk, such as in the love story I’m writing have it be “If you don’t marry for love, you’ll be sorry”?
Yes, very often you’ll find that the story’s larger and more universal theme breaks down into a more specific “message” based on the individual story’s plot and character arc. You might find this post helpful: https://www.helpingwritersbecomeauthors.com/storys-theme-2/