The Ghost and the Darkness

Inciting Event: The doctor tells about the orderly who was attacked by a man eater. Patterson initiates a stake out to kill the lion.

First Plot Point: Maheena is killed.

First Pinch Point: Patterson discovers there are two lions; Angus is killed.

Midpoint: The hunter Remington arrives to help kill the lions.

Second Pinch Point: During the hunt, Patterson’s gun misfires and the lion escapes.

Third Plot Point: Everyone in the new hospital is massacred. All the surviving workers flee.

Climax: The surviving lion kills Remington.

Climactic Moment: Patterson kills the last lion.

Resolution: The workers return to finish the bridge, and Patterson’s wife and baby arrive safely.

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