Another Thin Man

Inciting Event: Nick and Nora arrive at Col. McFay’s and discover someone is threatening him.

First Plot Point: Church threatens Nick and his family.

First Pinch Point: Col. McFay is murdered.

Midpoint: McFay’s daughter’s fiancé tries to shoot Nick and is killed.

Second Pinch Point: Church’s sidekick causes a fight at the West India Club.

Third Plot Point: Two thugs try to kill Nick.

Climax: Church is murdered.

Climactic Moment: Nick reveals the killer.

Resolution: Nick and Nora take a rest.

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