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How to Write an Epilogue That Works

By K.M. Weiland | @KMWeiland

In this week’s video, learn how to avoid the fatal flaws of epilogues by studying Tanya Egan Gibson’s How to Buy a Love of Reading.



Video Transcription: Epilogues, like prologues, are, by their very definition, extraneous. And, as a result, they’re often unnecessary. Too many epilogues are self-indulgent happily-ever-afters by authors who want to make sure the reader knows everything that happens to the characters after the story. But the fact is: if it happens after the story, then readers don’t need to know. And if they do need to know, then your story likely ended too soon.

Most stories aren’t intended to tell every detail of a character’s life. A story is just a snapshot, a set period of time chosen and extracted from a character’s life because it offers an inherent dramatic arc. Inserting what is essentially a footnote after the story, telling the reader what became of the characters, often serves to distract from the point of the story itself, or water down the effect of the ending.

There are, however, exceptions. In her debut novel How to Buy a Love of Reading, Tanya Egan Gibson utilizes her epilogue to provide closure for readers and characters alike. Her epilogue works for a number of reasons, most notably because it was necessary. Because her book proper ended on a tragic note, the reader needed a glimpse into the future of the characters to be reassured that they were going to be okay, that they recovered from the tragedy, that they moved forward with their lives and became better people because of what happened during the story.

Instead of offering a pat summary of extraneous post-story events, Gibson’s epilogue presents a single dramatized scene, in which she masterfully avoids tying her story up in a neat little package, but, instead, manages to both answer the reader’s salient questions and still leave them with a sense that the characters’ lives will continue after the back cover has been closed on the story. If we want to create fiction that lives, this sense of continuation should be a key factor when considering whether our stories require epilogues. 

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15 comments

  1. Marisa Birns February 10, 2010 at 9:24 AM

    I'm intrigued now by How to Buy a Love of Reading.

    Once we dig out of this blizzard, I'm going to the bookstore!

    Thanks.

  2. K.M. Weiland February 10, 2010 at 9:41 AM

    It's an interesting book, to be sure, but not for the faint of heart. Part snarky parody, part biting social commentary, part witty meta-fiction, part beautiful lyricism - this book isn't going to be for everyone, but its sheer audacity in the unique department and its brutal honesty make it a story I'm not likely to forget anytime soon.

  3. Maggie Woychik February 10, 2010 at 10:35 AM

    Sounds like my kind of book, Katie. BTW, you're doing a fine job with the vlogs. Keep up the good work!

  4. K.M. Weiland February 10, 2010 at 10:48 AM

    Thanks, Maggie!

  5. Liberty Speidel February 10, 2010 at 11:06 AM

    Interesting... I've heard different points of view on whether to write an epilogue or not, and to me it seems it depends on what your genre is.

    I seem to see a lot of writers in the mystery genre that write epilogues. Some authors, like Janet Evanovich and J.D. Robb, use them, but not in every book. Others use them routinely. Usually, as you say, they use them to tie up certain things, and in some cases (as in certain Evanovich epilogues I'm thinking of), hook you into the next book.

    In my WIP 'Homebody', I have an epilogue. But, the only reason I have it is because I left a few loose ends that needed to be tied up that I couldn't get done before the murderer was caught. Also, as I go on to revise, I think the epilogue will hold more importance in the overall character arc of my main character.

    Loving the vlog!

  6. K.M. Weiland February 10, 2010 at 11:08 AM

    I do think epilogues can take on an entirely different angle in series. They become rather like "previews" for the next installment.

  7. Sarah Jensen February 10, 2010 at 1:21 PM

    The girls at If You Give a Girl a Pen have awarded you with the Sunshine Award.

  8. K.M. Weiland February 10, 2010 at 1:31 PM

    Aw, thank you so much! You've made my day.

  9. Kristen Torres-Toro February 10, 2010 at 7:13 PM

    I love my epilogue in my novel. It was fun to write and has the perfect tone (at least, I hope so). :0) Epilogues don't always work. They aren't for every story. But they can are a lot of fun!

  10. K.M. Weiland February 10, 2010 at 7:35 PM

    I've never written an epilogue. My WIP may end up demanding one. It will be interesting to see how things develop.

  11. jdcoughlin February 12, 2010 at 9:20 AM

    I haven't even thought about whether I would be doing one. I know people have told me they want a little more of my book, but I want it to stop. I want them to wonder. I am so with you about distracting from the story itself.
    Great post!!

  12. K.M. Weiland February 12, 2010 at 9:36 AM

    Bottom line: only the author knows what's right for his story. And if the epilogue feels wrong for you, I'd definitely skip it.

  13. Anonymous May 29, 2012 at 5:41 PM

    im confused

  14. Anonymous May 29, 2012 at 5:42 PM

    wait so if you were to wright an epilague is there any way it could be wrong or is it all your opinion?

  15. K.M. Weiland May 29, 2012 at 6:28 PM

    Ultimately, this is my opinion. But, as evidenced by the multitude of non-epilogued stories, the epilogue needed far less often than not.

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