Depending on the type of story you write, the setting may be little more than an afterthought, an arbitrary decision made simply because your characters have to live somewhere. In the best of stories, however, setting is an inherent key in bringing to life not just the scenery but the characters themselves. As such, it isn’t something we can afford to overlook. Your answers to the following questions may show you the weak points in your setting construction and help you use it to its full potential.
1. Is your setting inherent to your story?
In some stories, the setting is so important that to change it would mean changing the entire plot. In Empire of the Sun
2. How does your character view his setting?
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You are always looking for ways to deliver character to your reader. One of the most important and ready ways of doing that is through the character’s interaction with his or her city…. Because he is really contemplating himself.3. Are your characters experiencing the setting with all their senses?
Utilize all five of your character’s senses to bring the setting to life. Random details of description, no matter how beautifully penned, don’t matter to the story unless they are filtered through the character’s individual experience. The heat of a summer day doesn’t matter until the character is the one feeling it. The sound of the telephone ringing only makes a difference if the character hears it. The whisper of jasmine in the air is pointless unless it has meaning for the character who smells it.
4. Does your setting affect the mood?
Setting, more than any other facet of the story, allows us the most flexibility for creating mood and pacing. The ominous thunderheads gathering above the protagonist’s cornfield, the forbidding chill of the abandoned shack on the side of the road, the stuffy air inside a funeral home—all these bits of setting serve to inform the reader of the mood you’re trying to strike.
Choose your settings carefully. Don’t settle for the obvious answers. Look beyond clichés and examine the needs of your story to find the most appropriate setting. Then juice it for every drop of usefulness. If you can bring the setting to life as a character in its own right, you’ll be that much closer to creating a story your readers will never forget.
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Great article! The senses is such an important one that I personally need to focus on more. I usually forget to include smell and touch, both very important to creating a convincing scene, and the characters actions within that scene.
In my novel that I started this year, I have brought the major snowfalls that we here in the UK saw this winter into my story. This has brought a disruption to the setting which is aiding the story, and I've managed to use this to affect the main characters mood, and I'm trying to make it really part of the story.
Thanks for the article!
Great post. I am currently facing the setting problem with my WIP. It is set in fictional city, which is very alive in my own mind, but it doesn't come across like that on the page, so one of my key revision goal is to make sure that setting comes alive through my characters.
Excellent post! I'm terrible at setting and tend to focus on dialogue and action rather than description and setting. It is something I really need to work on. :)
Thanks for another helpful and informative post! I love the idea of making the setting another character with its own wants, needs and moods.
Note to self: Do not forget that advice. Setting-> character. Setting-> character.
I love playing with setting. That's one of my favorite things to write!
Great post... and just what I needed to read, because setting is something I'm really trying to improve on :) In some of my stories, the setting will enhance the story, whereas other stories, setting comes as an after-thought. So definitely trying to work on that! Thanks for this post :)
This is the one thing I tried to ensure I added to my MS. I am not sure if I have managed, but I am going to check back on areas that might be a little weak. Interesting post.
@Christopher: I think smell is probably the sense we neglect most - and the most difficult one to evoke. But very effective when done right.
@Wanderer: Fictional settings have there own set of problems. But I generally the freedom of expression very freeing
@Sherrinda: Setting and description are one of the "silent partners." They're vital, but we also have to be careful not to dwell on them too long.
@Heather: When you think of some of the best classics, setting is almost as huge as the characters themselves. The South in Gone With the Wind? The galaxy far, far away in Star Wars?
@Kristen: It is fun, isn't it? I'm having a ball with it in my WIP set in Kenya and WWI.
@Mia: Once you start focusing, you'll find it a lot of fun!
@Glynis: That's the beautiful thing about revision - we can always go back and fix the things we missed in the first draft.
Excellent post! My story is set in ancient Egypt and it simply wouldn't be the same in a different place. I look at setting as a way to add depth to the story- it makes it 3D.
I agree; smell is really difficult to get right, but very effective. Have you read 'Perfume' by Patrick Süskind? Fantastic use of smell in that novel!
Great post. This is something that I need to give more attention to.
@Stephanie: One thing about writing historical and speculative fiction (as I do) is that the settings are almost always inherent - and researching/creating them is half the fun!
@Christopher: Haven't read it, but I've heard of it. It was an interesting concept: a whole story based around the sense of smell.
@Lorna: The beauty of setting is that, once you get started on it, it's lots of fun!
I've sometimes found that settings actually inspire a whole story - I want to mine what is mysterious about a place, what the people do there, who would hate to be there. Great post!
I've yet to write a story where the setting wasn't integral. Setting is one of my joys.
I'm having a blast researching the setting of my WIP--Michigan in the late 1800s. My main character is based on my great-great grandfather who was a shanty boy back then. Luckily I have a 16-stanza poem he wrote called The Harvest of the Pine that's full of sights and sounds and smells. :D
What a neat starting point for your research! I'm sure the fact that it's a setting that matters to you personally only ups your investment in it for your writing.
The post was helpful to me and my thoughts. I'm new to writing and enjoy reading your post as well as others. It helps me to sharpen my skills, and encourages me to continue.
Once again, thank you for your helpful insight to writing.
Louis
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Regarding fictional settings, the best way I've found for this to work is to base it on an actual place; otherwise it won't resonate. My fictional town in The Justice Coalition and its sequel are based on my experiences in Denver, so it feels like a real place. With sci-fi, of course, it gets a little trickier ...
~ VT
I've never had a problem finding verisimilitude in my made-up settings, but I had a ton of fun researching real-life Chicago for my fantasy Dreamers Come.
This post is full of helpful tips, but I'd have to say that there's nothing that can be more helpful than ones own experiences in the place. Most of the stories I write are set in Kansas City--a place I grew up visiting and now live in. I remember how it feels to have just moved here and the unfamiliarity of everything, getting used to where things were and the idiosyncrasies of the city. I couldn't have done that so well if I'd set my stories in my old hometown, which now, I could write a story set there with the distance of almost a decade.
Finding just the right details, though, can be tricky. I'd like my readers to be able to get a sense of Kansas City to the point that if they've read a few of my books, they feel they could visit the city and be able to find their way around easily.
I have always believed the setting is a very important detail to a good story. The setting helps to blend all the details together into the story. The setting can be the difference between a great story or a hum-drum story.
Thank you for the post. I am currently writing about my setting and looking ways to make it come alive.
Thanks!
@Liberty: I'm not a traveler - both because of the expense and personal preference. But I've actually found that I can get a more vivid description of a place I'm not intimately familiar with. Research gives me the details I need, and since I'm not overexposed to setting, I think my perspective is fresher. But I do have a story planned that I want to set in my hometown!
@Nina: Very true. Many of my favorite books are ones with a particularly strong sense of setting.
@Christine: Have fun!
As always, a well-written post.
Setting has been an important part of my novel(s) - almost another character. Home, Place, Belonging seem to be a 'theme' whether on purpose or not (some say there are no accidents when we write, because it all comes from 'us' -)
One of my favorite "surprises" in writing (and reading) is the discovery of the inherent themes that aren't even necessarily intended. The themes that well from inside are usually the most powerful.
Katie, I just can't believe how much your blog has inspired my own writing. Thank you, thank you, thank you! I love descriptions of nature, and the settings written by others. Now it is my turn to start writing the setting.Thank you for the encouragement!
Dive in and have fun!
You know, I never even thought of using the setting for anything? I just picked a place that worked for the story.
So many obvious things don't stand out to me about writing. Thanks for sharing. :)
Corra
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Great post!
You know setting is something I don't think about that much. I really should. I had to build Purgatory for my current MS, and I think I still have some work on that... Thanks for the reminder ;o)
@Corra: Oh, I don't know that setting as a personality of its own is necessarily obvious. All of writing is a learning process. New and improved ideas come along every day!
@Erica: World-building is a blast. It gives you such an opportunity to bring the setting to life.
Thank you for bringing all of these elements of setting to my attention. Setting is something I can honestly say I've neglected to give much more than cursory consideration.
Surprisingly, setting *isn't* one of our main considerations in writing - probably because you can neglect it and still write a splendid story. But imagine how much better a story results when setting is given its just due!
Wow...great post. I'll admit, my characters haven't really explored their setting, but they will today. ; )
Sounds like fun! I'm in the middle of research for my WIP, so I get to explore setting today in another way!
In the two books I've written so far, the setting was wedded intimately with my main character. In the first book - She breathed, talked, all her mannerisms were brought about because of where she was raised and where the book took place.
It worked so well and had such a natural flow, I used the same formula for the next book as well. I find it breathes life into my characters, gives them a sense of belonging, personality and heart. (Hugs)Indigo
Backstory - which includes huge chucks of setting - is integral to storytelling, in my opinion... even if none of the backstory itself appears in the book.
I'm not convinced you haven't already been nominated for this, but I've nominated you for a Prolific Blogger Award: http://jbrubacher.blogspot.com/2010/02/national-storytelling-week-prolific.html
Don't feel you have to play along, but I wanted to recognize how much I enjoy your posts. Thank you!
Thank you, Jen! I'm tickled pink!
Enjoyed the post. Setting is my weakest link. Thanks!
You're welcome. Here's to strengthening that link!